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Advertisement Paragraph Poll

Post by Ace on August 26th 2010, 6:59 pm

Things in red are my changes. Most of 'em are just grammatical corrections and additions to make the paragraph more understandable to people that have never been on this site.

Choose the best paragraph here. You might post "Kiwi's pic would be good with Bee's". Well, I don't give a dang at the moment. So don't waste your time. Or I'll freakin eat you.

Bee's:

*murders the different font*

The Clans have journeyed far, leaving behind the ruins of their old home in search of a better home. And now that they have found it, everything seems perfect. Prey is abundant, and stocks of herbs have never been higher. Every cat, from the youngest kit to the oldest warrior, has enough to eat, and there is no more reason for Clan rivalry. Not even a single Twoleg has set foot near the Clan cats.

But soon, the Clans will discover that they are not the only ones in the new territory. There is a group of cats known as the Coven who live near the mountains, and although their ways are shrouded in shadows and mystery, there is the inevitability that more cats can only lead to discord.

The Coven isn't the only group that they will have to deal with. A tribe has also settled down in their new home; not a tribe of cats, but a tribe of foxes. They call themselves the Blue Moon Tribe, a tribe consisting of one of the cats' biggest predators. What's even more unsettling is the fact that they can communicate with them. How will the cats cope, living side-by-side with their enemies?

Will you follow the ways of the Clans? Will you tread the path of a Coven cat? Or will you become one with the Tribe?



*LIKEREALLYBIGANDRANDOMSNEEZE*

River's:

..... *murders the different font*

Cold shadows twisted silently around the now deep- green leaves, as corrosive as the most potent of acids. The once cheery and bright forest was quickly being reduced to nothing but dark pine trees and the black abyss of the sky; lit only by the sliver of the moon. This unforgiving black plague suffocated and warped as the band of ice-hearted felines passed by, their hateful eyes scanning the scene for their destination. A path of destruction lay behind them. Finally, a silky black she-cat stepped from the horde, eyes closed and glistening claws unsheathed. She waved her tail towards a deep blue pool, nearly void of any color at all.

“Here. I’m drawn here.”

She stepped forward without a glance backwards, gracefully picking her way to sit, tail curled around her slender paws, at the edge of the pool. A patched tom followed her, placing himself by the still water as well, head cocked. Before he had a chance to question her, the she-cat had slashed once at the pool, sending ripples splashing to the edges. An image cleared and suddenly Nightstar- DarkClan leader-, a fox, looking savage, and a new tom, flanked by a black and orange femme, appeared. She blinked open her eyes, a murderous glint in their deep and hypnotizing gaze. A crooked smile crept to her maw, tasting the sudden hope and the ferocious need for revenge on her tongue.

“Siren, are you sure?”
Famine queried.

“Of course,” voice like pulled silk as she gestured to the surface of the pool, “Behold, NightClan, the beginning of our reign.” She paused, lowering her voice just a touch.
“And the end of theirs.”

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The Warrior Cats have just finished their journey to a new home.. and have been welcomed by plentiful prey, mild weather, and, of course, a band of cats that do not take kindly to visitors. Evil is mounting, traitors are amidst the clans, and cruel and heartless deeds are becoming common.

They thought they were safe. They figured the dangers were done.
The clans will have to realize that their faith can only go so far.
Pick a side…or die trying.
You can fall…or you can fly.

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Re: Advertisement Paragraph Poll

Post by Bee on August 26th 2010, 7:18 pm

FIRST!
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Now that that's over with... do I have to vote? D:


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Post by Legion on August 26th 2010, 7:20 pm

First.
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Re: Advertisement Paragraph Poll

Post by Bee on August 26th 2010, 7:20 pm

What the hell, Iron. XD
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Post by Member on August 26th 2010, 7:44 pm

Fist.

*mentions the Kiwi pic Honey paragraph thing just because Flint said something about it*
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Post by kiwiattack on August 26th 2010, 8:10 pm

So I guess mine won't be considered an entry at all then? .-.

*votes for Bee*
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Re: Advertisement Paragraph Poll

Post by Ace on August 28th 2010, 12:45 pm

IT'S. EEEEEEEVENNNNNN. D<

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Post by Member on August 28th 2010, 12:51 pm

How is it even? Everyone voted Bee's. XD
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Post by Bee on August 28th 2010, 2:04 pm

No... *points to results* It's 50/50 right now. T_T
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Post by Legion on August 28th 2010, 2:09 pm

... TIP THE SCALE!
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Post by kiwiattack on August 28th 2010, 2:15 pm

*makes Bee Adver campaign posters*
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Post by Member on August 28th 2010, 3:27 pm

Oh... *didn't see the vote part* Well... *goes to vote*
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Post by Celeste~ on August 28th 2010, 4:21 pm

WOW!! O.O those are amazing!!
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Post by Ace on August 28th 2010, 4:32 pm

Memmer how... *pinches eyebrows and leaves*

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Post by Bee on August 28th 2010, 4:33 pm

Pahahaha... it's such a close race... :'D

*hyperventilates* It's at 50/50 so often... x.x
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Post by Member on August 28th 2010, 5:09 pm

You know I'm not smart Flint.

Anyways, even with me not voting, Bee still had the most votes.
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Post by Bee on August 28th 2010, 7:34 pm

It's even closer now. o.o
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Post by Member on August 28th 2010, 7:56 pm

HURRY, FLINT! PICK THE WINNER! D<
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Post by Ace on August 28th 2010, 8:11 pm

I'll wait for Bubble to vote...

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Post by Member on August 28th 2010, 8:14 pm

Wha... *kicks Flint in the head so hard that his brain goes around the world in 80 days* D<
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Post by Ace on August 28th 2010, 8:16 pm

*replaces brain* When my other brain hits me in exactly 80 days, I'm gonna be really PO'd.

Bubble should vote because I know her vote won't be biased.

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Post by Member on August 28th 2010, 8:37 pm

*rolls eyes* Fine. >> Get another tie.
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Re: Advertisement Paragraph Poll

Post by Bee on August 28th 2010, 8:38 pm

You pretty much just said that they're gonna vote for her. XD

And I wouldn't be surprised. XD
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Post by River on August 28th 2010, 11:30 pm

... *coughs*

Just let Bee win.
I don't really care.

You guys all secretly hate me anyways. x]
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Post by Bee on August 29th 2010, 1:37 am

... Riv. D: No hatred here~

And why would they let me win if yours is just as good or better than mine? It's more often than not at 50/50. :\
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